Rising Wishes: Ur-Elopes

Wednesday 24 April 2013

Ur-Elopes

In my mind’s eye

I see you

In my mind’s eye

I see our future view

In bate I bare my heart

But all I have is "You"

To be, or not to be

It is all depended on "You"

I wear my heart; I wear a smile

To thine own self be true.

Truly madly and deeply in love

In love with only "You"

5 comments:

Anonymous said...: Nice !!!; 24 April 2013 at 16:58
Gracy Jayaraj said...: Hi Anon,

Thanks.; 25 April 2013 at 12:04
THE FEINTING MARINER said...: suffocatingly saccharine ,
but nice,
no doubt; 25 April 2013 at 12:25
Gracy Jayaraj said...: Thanks. Am glad that you liked it.; 25 April 2013 at 13:03
THE FEINTING MARINER said...: nice , is too simple a word to describe your poetry !!! its so destinct, so stylish , so touching , it makes one want to cry ( and no ...they arent cutting onions ) , you truly love the person you have written that poetry for , and must be very inspired by him/her to have written this; 25 April 2013 at 13:14

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